User talk:Villkomoses
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on this page and someone will drop by to help. Again, welcome! Joyous! Noise! 17:49, 27 March 2024 (UTC)
March 2024[edit]
Hello, I'm Ternera. I wanted to let you know that I removed one or more external links you added to MiHoYo because they seemed inappropriate for an encyclopedia. If you think I made a mistake, or if you have any questions, you can leave me a message on my talk page or take a look at our guidelines about links. Thank you. Ternera (talk) 18:10, 27 March 2024 (UTC)
Hi, I'm Elemimele; I notice that you're doing grammatical updates on a lot of articles, including shifting narratives from the present tense to the past tense. There is nothing wrong with telling a story in the present tense or the past, so I don't think these changes are actually necessary. I have no objection to the changes, but in many cases you're missing a lot of verbs, leading to a story that swaps between present and past tense at random. Here's what you left at Guan Sheng
"Back at Liangshan, Song Jiang faced Guan Sheng. Impressed with Guan's looks and fighting prowess, Song swears (present) he would win him over. He worked out a plan with Huyan Zhuo, a general who has (probably needs to be had) defected after having failed in his imperial mission to stamp out Liangshan, to ensnare Guan. Huyan went to Guan's camp alone, claiming that he had reluctantly joined the bandits and now wanted to clear his name. Guan believed Huyan's claim, especially after the latter having falsely beatened (word doesn't exist) a Liangshan chieftain in a fight on horseback. Not smelling a rat, Guan follows (present) Huyan on a night raid on Song Jiang's camp. He was surrounded, unhorsed by hooks and captured. Treated with great respect by Song Jiang, who vowed that Liangshan is (probably needs to be was) composed of reluctant rebels, Guan is (present) touched and joined the bandits. Xuan Zan and Hao Siwen, who were also captured, followed suit. Zhang Heng and Ruan Xiaoqi were freed. "
This is unhelpful as you've taken a short paragraph that had nothing wrong with it, and introduced six errors. You are also making subtle grammatical errors (for example the change of through to throughout at The Ravages of Time, where through is the correct word)[1] Please could you be careful about this? Elemimele (talk) 13:01, 31 March 2024 (UTC)
- Hi ternera! no Worries, I am still learning to be better Wiki Editor, these advices are Noted. Thanks for taking the Time. Villkomoses (talk) 09:27, 1 April 2024 (UTC)
Update, I just checked the Manual of Style, see MOS:PLOT. Changing narratives to the past tense is against Wikipedia's style; please could you stop doing it? Sorry about your wasted time; hopefully you can find other things to do? Elemimele (talk) 13:05, 31 March 2024 (UTC)
- Hi ! Elemimele no Worries, I am still learning to be better Wiki Editor, these advices are Noted. Thanks for taking the Time. Villkomoses (talk) 09:28, 1 April 2024 (UTC)
Also, shifting tenses, and many of the other edits you made (most of which are now undone), has nothing to do with grammar. Drmies (talk) 13:22, 31 March 2024 (UTC)
- Hi Drmies ! no Worries, I am still learning to be better Wiki Editor, these advices are Noted. Thanks for taking the Time. Villkomoses (talk) 09:28, 1 April 2024 (UTC)
Please read[edit]
There is currently a discussion at Wikipedia:Administrators' noticeboard/Incidents regarding an issue with which you may have been involved. Thank you. Elemimele (talk) 16:37, 31 March 2024 (UTC)
March 2024[edit]
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. Black Kite (talk) 16:42, 31 March 2024 (UTC)April 2024[edit]
Regarding your edits to Healer Girl, please use the preview button before you save your edit; this helps you find any citation errors you have made, as seen here, where you made multiple citation errors. See Help:Referencing for beginners for further information on how to properly format citations.
Below the edit box is a Show preview button. Pressing this will show you what the page will look like without actually saving it. It is strongly recommended that you use this before saving. If you have any questions, contact the help desk for assistance. Isaidnoway (talk) 01:29, 8 April 2024 (UTC)
- Awesome! Thanks for the Assist, Still Learning Much ! Villkomoses (talk) 09:57, 8 April 2024 (UTC)
Fasting and autophagy[edit]
Hello - regarding your question about how fasting and autophagy are linked, my edit summaries for your edits indicated that the possible linkage is speculation and only at the level of lab research, as shown in this report. There is no clinical evidence to indicate normal fasting or calorie restriction involves autophagy as a mechanism of weight loss. Zefr (talk) 17:15, 19 April 2024 (UTC)
Fabulous Beasts 有兽焉 moved to draftspace[edit]
Thanks for your contributions to Fabulous Beasts. Unfortunately, I do not think it is ready for publishing at this time because it has no sources, it has too many problems of language or grammar, it is a poor translation and Develop the article in draft space until it is ready for mainspace. Needs better translation, and the other tagged issues all need to be addressed. Note no Chinese characters should be in the article title.. I have converted your article to a draft which you can improve, undisturbed for a while.
Please see more information at Help:Unreviewed new page. When the article is ready for publication, please click on the "Submit your draft for review!" button at the top of the page OR move the page back. BastunĖġáḍβáś₮ŭŃ! 11:30, 7 May 2024 (UTC)